Comments on: Jack [1] http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/2010/02/jack-1/ A Foreverdyingbrightly Venture Sun, 29 Jan 2012 21:45:00 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Blush of the day: Apparently, I write like Stephen King http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/2010/02/jack-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1117 Blush of the day: Apparently, I write like Stephen King Thu, 15 Jul 2010 21:10:50 +0000 http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/?p=4738#comment-1117 [...] JACK Read Ch. 4 and find out more about the Company, the "419" and the coming danger. [...] [...] JACK Read Ch. 4 and find out more about the Company, the "419" and the coming danger. [...]

]]> By: xxxevilgrinxxx http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/2010/02/jack-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1059 xxxevilgrinxxx Wed, 31 Mar 2010 23:37:19 +0000 http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/?p=4738#comment-1059 weeeee! Thanks, C! I wanted a stronger Jack, an equal, and the idea in this one is to have that happen (man, I'd really love to drop what I have planned but I can't, GAH!) Riddick isn't going to be weak here, but he's going to be humanised in Jack's eyes, much like most childhood heroes are. Glad to have you reading :D weeeee! Thanks, C! I wanted a stronger Jack, an equal, and the idea in this one is to have that happen (man, I’d really love to drop what I have planned but I can’t, GAH!)

Riddick isn’t going to be weak here, but he’s going to be humanised in Jack’s eyes, much like most childhood heroes are.

Glad to have you reading :D

]]> By: Chriscent http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/2010/02/jack-1/comment-page-1/#comment-1058 Chriscent Wed, 31 Mar 2010 23:21:41 +0000 http://foreverdyingbrightly.com/blog/?p=4738#comment-1058 Another beautiful beginning. I always loved these charries, nice to see they'll have new adventures. Your writing is as perfect as usual. Descriptions and amount of depth spot on. Love seeing Jack reaching a point where SHE feels she can stand equal to Riddick, and can even see his limitations. A Riddick that isn't all-powerful. Heaven wept. Another beautiful beginning. I always loved these charries, nice to see they’ll have new adventures.

Your writing is as perfect as usual. Descriptions and amount of depth spot on. Love seeing Jack reaching a point where SHE feels she can stand equal to Riddick, and can even see his limitations.

A Riddick that isn’t all-powerful. Heaven wept.

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